Thursday, September 8, 2011

To brevity

The amusing me
drinks a little wine
gets drunk

and speaks like
a poètesse maudite to
a crowd of drunkards

I'm all alone
I cry my eyes out

my heart floating
in a bottle of booze.


--
Kenia Cris

13 deixaram suas linhas │left their lines│:

  1. nice kenia! my entry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/30/lines/

    ReplyDelete
  2. Wow. This is fabulous. How many of us have been there? Me, for one.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Right on the money, this write! Very well done!

    My entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/

    ReplyDelete
  4. such a lovely write and so well done. I am sure more than one of us has been there before. Happy rally week
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/#comment-584

    ReplyDelete
  5. Yeah... I've been there. Well worded.

    http://www.classicnycstory.com/2011/09/entry-2881.htm

    ReplyDelete
  6. At least the poetry helps one put the sadness into its artistic form, rather than leaving it afloat in a bottle.

    ReplyDelete
  7. I am sure this poem with stike a chord with many. Cool poem!


    California Ink in Motion

    ReplyDelete
  8. The emotional honesty of this is great, to flow out onto paper and release.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Ah, yes, this does strike a chord~ So honest and real! Well Done~

    ReplyDelete
  10. I loved this, and I love the tag too.

    ReplyDelete

Deixe suas linhas tortas │Leave your crooked lines│

Blog Widget by LinkWithin